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Leone 

Talk about making something easy for me to read ! I personally love to read things that are exactly that - readable. What you have done here is great. However i found that some facts tended to steer away from what your debate was about. Apart from that this was very informative and opened my mind up to different ways of looking at how much responsibilities a parent holds on their child. In this case , there is alot. Well done. :)

Chance.T

What a statement! I like the extent you have gone to to prove your argument, personally speaking I do however disagree. In many ways yes Facebook has developed tonnes of ways for communication technologically speaking, but in general I see alot of regular form of communication that goes on within todays society. 
Your layout and use of imagery in each of your posts have kept me intact to read the whole thing. You have done a great job and grabbing a reader's attention. Your debate and proven statements are a job well done. 

Akosita

This is such a broad topic to debate and expand on so i commend you for your point of view as well as narrowing it down to the limited words given, seeing that i agree with your argument as well. I like how you've taken a topic that is still so very fresh in today's society. I find that more are against than for this and reasons may vary from ones upbringing, culture and most commonly religious beliefs. Personally speaking I have a lot of homosexual friends who are much more loving towards kids than some straight men are. If I were to do this debate I know it will all be from personal interest. You have done a great job of incorpoorating both views and your layout has a very good flow to it. Your use of language is also not too formal and not at all informal. This is great stuff Akosita

Lane

This has to be my favourite use of layout by far. You have a unique layout that would keep a reader like myself looking all over for what's next. I also like your choice of argument seeing that this is such a common disaster in New Zealand due to teenage drinking. If anything this is a worry. In the stats you have shown it clearly proves why New Zealand driving age should be raised to an older age. Teenagers are still not mentally ready for the life threatening effects that could occur if not taken seriously what they are doing. Your use of language is readable and over all this topic and everything displayed is awesome.

John

Hi John ! Oooh , I like the topic but I don't really come across the argument if yo get what i mean. What's proven? And another thing a use of imagery would've been nice to help make your page stand out a bit . You have somewhat listed down things about space exploration but where is your argument. Apart from that I think you have done an okay job. Well done.